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CRITIQUEPLZ.

Update 06/24...I decided this would look better with cooler colors. Hail, Levels and Masks!

...It's technically infinite size, as it's a vector. I did add the bg in Photoshop though (layer blending? Not an Illustrator feature).

Credit where it's due: I wouldn't have thought of doing things this way if I hadn't been looking at some of ~bboypion's stuff.


And if you've read The Satanic Verses, I didn't think of Ayesha until I'd done the initial drawing (so it's unintentional).

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:icongolden-stardust:
It's nice. Light, airy, cute. But, here's the back of her head?!! Waay tooo small. Haha, the more I loo at this the more I like it. Including her slightly confused expression as if she's just properly realised what it actually is. "Yum....snack! Oh....butterfly" I like the other butterfly flying away as well. Pretty awesome! I like the different layers you've built up, especially on the eyes and the scarf. Very good!

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:iconoblivion00:
Thanks :)
She's supposed to be melting into, well, space--I think it might be more obvious now.

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:icongolden-stardust:
ah hah! yes, that makes much more sense! Lovely work!

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:iconthebutcheress:
Neat effect! I love when vectors don't look 'heavy' and really 'solid'... you know?

Very nicely done.
:iconoblivion00:
Thanks! Yeah, I definitely know what you mean...I will keep this in mind for the future.

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:iconkabirawhisper:
I like the butterfly. I love how it just contrasts with the entire picture. I mean, it doesn' have the exact color scheme as everything else, and that makes it really pop.

I love the colors especially the green in the upper lefthand corner. It gives it an interesting look. :P

Nice job, by the way. :)

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:iconwateryash:
I really like the butterfly, but the rest is too light, in my opinion.
:iconoblivion00:
Oh, wow. I did not pay attention to how light it looks on this website--hopefully it's fixed now. Thanks!

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